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Oh, Lucas, it was really worth waiting. Many thanks! Have listened to your recitation three times in a row ( with many more times to come later on and for as long as I only have access to this site!)
Because of its beautiful grin, the pig should now be given some name like the famous Cheshire Cat.
Your pronunciation of the word "butcher" differs from mine - you say [b^cze] and I would say [bucze] (sorry but finding all the phonetic symbols is beyond my intelligence), but who am I to say if yours isn't correct.

It's a million times better and more exciting to listen to a poem so please just don't stop...!Michał B. edytował(a) ten post dnia 30.12.08 o godzinie 22:29

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Łukasz Klejment:
wow, Luke :)
Do you think you can you disclose the technicalities of your working on a poem?
do you check the pronunciation with a native speaker/dictionary or you use your intuition or somehow else?
how many times do you rehearse before it's finally recorded?
do you record everything in one go or you make pauses?
do you ask people for feedback and does it matter?
is it fun?

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Michał B.:
Dear Michał,

thanks a lot, you are very kind and wise man ;-)
Your pronunciation of the word "butcher" differs from mine - you say [b^cze] and I would say [bucze] (sorry but finding all the phonetic symbols is beyond my intelligence), but who am I to say if yours isn't correct.

Yes, you do have right!!! The word: butcher, should be pronounced like you have correctly noticed with short: "u".
It's a million times better and more exciting to listen to a poem
so please just don't stop...!

One is sure mate, that I'll never stop practicing, as I am still making lots of mistakes but practice make us perfect!!!

Best Wishes!!!

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I'm sure, Luke, you know how much I love your work, don't you? I now could recognise your voice anywhere in the world!!!F*** that stupid 'butcher'! Even the pig proved to be cleverer than he was! :) I'm sure some people in England say it your way.
You must have awoken some critic in me - hahaha! On the other hand, if I had said everything was perfect, I could have lulled your alertness to the most minute details in the future :)

I do hope you have already started working on your next poem and I am looking forward to finding it here shortly. Please!

Meanwhile, I will keep listening to the ones you were kind to post here.

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Lidia K.:
Łukasz Klejment:
wow, Luke :)
If the very smile at the end means that you slightly enjoyed listening, I will be so glad then!!!
Do you think you can you disclose the technicalities of your working on a poem?
Not really. I do not see any purpose in doing so..
do you check the pronunciation with a native speaker/dictionary or you use your intuition or somehow else?
It depends, mostly I am doing it unconsciously but there are plenty of words which I have to check...
how many times do you rehearse before it's finally recorded?
It truly depends on the very difficulty of the poem and other existential conditions.
do you record everything in one go or you make pauses?
It is one go recording otherwise It might be pretty difficult, as you ought to focus and truly engage in the poem.
do you ask people for feedback and does it matter?
Every feedback matters a lot, even if it's bad critique!!!
As some very wise man said:" What doesn't kill you makes you stronger".
is it fun?
It gives me pretty much fun and lots of new challenges and experiences.
Believe me the more fun and excitement you may gain performing in front of the very audience, live!!!

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Having drunk several beers, my English friend produced the following poem:

There was a cow upon a hill
It`s not there now
It must have shifted


Impressed?

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Wow! We are indeed!

George Eliot (1819 – 1880)

Sweet Evenings Come and Go, Love

"La noche buena se viene,
La noche buena se va,
Y nosotros nos iremos
Y no volveremos mas."
-- Old Villancico

Sweet evenings come and go, love,
They came and went of yore:
This evening of our life, love,
Shall go and come no more.

When we have passed away, love,
All things will keep their name;
But yet no life on earth, love,
With ours will be the same.

The daisies will be there, love,
The stars in heaven will shine:
I shall not feel thy wish, love,
Nor thou my hand in thine.

A better time will come, love,
And better souls be born:
I would not be the best, love,
To leave thee now forlorn.

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Since Lucas offers no new recitation, I will post thisin the meantime:

Walt Whitman - Song of Myself (the beginning)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MBAMPc5TUgA&feature=rel...

read by William Hootkins

1

I celebrate myself, and sing myself,
And what I assume you shall assume,
For every atom belonging to me as good belongs to you.

I loafe and invite my soul,
I lean and loafe at my ease observing a spear of summer grass.

My tongue, every atom of my blood, form'd from this soil, this air,
Born here of parents born here from parents the same, and their
parents the same,
I, now thirty-seven years old in perfect health begin,
Hoping to cease not till death.

Creeds and schools in abeyance,
Retiring back a while sufficed at what they are, but never forgotten,
I harbor for good or bad, I permit to speak at every hazard,
Nature without check with original energy.

2

Houses and rooms are full of perfumes, the shelves are crowded with
perfumes,
I breathe the fragrance myself and know it and like it,
The distillation would intoxicate me also, but I shall not let it.

The atmosphere is not a perfume, it has no taste of the
distillation, it is odorless,
It is for my mouth forever, I am in love with it,
I will go to the bank by the wood and become undisguised and naked,
I am mad for it to be in contact with me.

The smoke of my own breath,
Echoes, ripples, buzz'd whispers, love-root, silk-thread, crotch and vine,
My respiration and inspiration, the beating of my heart, the passing
of blood and air through my lungs,
The sniff of green leaves and dry leaves, and of the shore and
dark-color'd sea-rocks, and of hay in the barn,

The sound of the belch'd words of my voice loos'd to the eddies of
the wind,
A few light kisses, a few embraces, a reaching around of arms,
The play of shine and shade on the trees as the supple boughs wag,
The delight alone or in the rush of the streets, or along the fields
and hill-sides,
The feeling of health, the full-noon trill, the song of me rising
from bed and meeting the sun.

Have you reckon'd a thousand acres much? have you reckon'd the earth much?
Have you practis'd so long to learn to read?
Have you felt so proud to get at the meaning of poems?

Stop this day and night with me and you shall possess the origin of
all poems,
You shall possess the good of the earth and sun, (there are millions
of suns left,)
You shall no longer take things at second or third hand, nor look through
the eyes of the dead, nor feed on the spectres in books,
You shall not look through my eyes either, nor take things from me,
You shall listen to all sides and filter them from your self.Michał B. edytował(a) ten post dnia 04.01.09 o godzinie 18:10

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Walt Whitman - To a Stranger

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J2clPh00OLc&feature=rel...
PASSING Stranger! you do not know how longingly I look upon you,
You must be he I was seeking, or she I was seeking, (it comes to me as of a dream,)
I have somewhere surely lived a life of joy with you,
All is recall'd as we flit by each other, fluid, affectionate, chaste, matured,
You grew up with me, were a boy with me or a girl with me,
I ate with you and slept with you, your body has become not yours
only nor left my body mine only,
You give me the pleasure of your eyes, face, flesh, as we pass, you take
of my beard, breast, hands, in return,
I am not to speak to you, I am to think of you when I sit alone or wake
at night alone,
I am to wait, I do not doubt I am to meet you again,
I am to see to it that I do not lose you.Michał B. edytował(a) ten post dnia 04.01.09 o godzinie 18:17

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Walt Whitman - Meditation

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j4s7ogE3x-4&feature=rel...

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Frank O'Hara - " Call Me".


Call Me


The eager note on my door said "Call me,"
call when you get in!" so I quickly threw
a few tangerines into my overnight bag,
straightened my eyelids and shoulders, and

headed straight for the door. It was autumn
by the time I got around the corner, oh all
unwilling to be either pertinent or bemused, but
the leaves were brighter than grass on the sidewalk!

Funny, I thought, that the lights are on this late
and the hall door open; still up at this hour, a
champion jai-alai player like himself? Oh fie!
for shame! What a host, so zealous! And he was

there in the hall, flat on a sheet of blood that
ran down the stairs. I did appreciate it. There are few
hosts who so thoroughly prepare to greet a guest
only casually invited, and that several months ago.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m2Kmp9z2yCY

Lyn Hejinian

In the dark sky there
are constellations, all of them
erotic and they break open
the streets
The streets exceed the house
On occasion the body exceeds
the self
Everyday someone replaces someone and
someone's mother is sad so
as to exceed
The bed is a popular
enclosure from which to depart
Outside the stars are stunning
--touching
It is a question of
scale
It is erotic when parts
exceed their scale

November 15, 1986Michał B. edytował(a) ten post dnia 08.01.09 o godzinie 16:58
Ania S.

Ania S. Fotografia i
rękodzieło
artystyczne

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Love

Love means to learn to look at yourself
The way one looks at distant things
For you are only one thing among many.
And whoever sees that way heals his heart,
Without knowing it, from various ills
A bird and a tree say to him: Friend.
Then he wants to use himself and things
So that they stand in the glow of ripeness.
It doesnt matter whether he knows what he serves:
Who serves best doesnt always understand.

Czesław Miłosz

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Children's Song
by R.S. Thomas

We live in our own world,
A world that is too small
For you to stoop and enter
Even on hands and knees,
The adult subterfuge.
And though you probe and pry
With analytic eye,
And eavesdrop all our talk
With an amused look,
You cannot find the centre
Where we dance, where we play,
Where life is still asleep
Under the closed flower,
Under the smooth shell
Of eggs in the cupped nest
That mock the faded blue
Of your remoter heaven.

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The Red Wheelbarrow
William Carlos Williams

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------

so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens.


Obrazek
Michał B. edytował(a) ten post dnia 09.01.09 o godzinie 21:58
Tatiana Z.

Tatiana Z. CAO @ Kontomatik

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Decalogue

Thou shalt no God but me adore:
'Twere too expensive to have more.

No images nor idols make
For Robert Ingersoll to break.

Take not God's name in vain; select
A time when it will have effect.

Work not on Sabbath days at all,
But go to see the teams play ball.

Honor thy parents. That creates
For life insurance lower rates.

Kill not, abet not those who kill;
Thou shalt not pay thy butcher's bill.

Kiss not thy neighbor's wife, unless
Thine own thy neighbor doth caress

Don't steal; thou'lt never thus compete
Successfully in business. Cheat.

Bear not false witness -- that is low --
But "hear 'tis rumored so and so."

Covet thou naught that thou hast not
By hook or crook, or somehow, got.

G.J.Tatiana Z. edytował(a) ten post dnia 27.01.09 o godzinie 18:13

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To no one: And Mary did time
by Lisa Bellear

Dear someone
out there who
may or may not
give a damn

‘I’m not a liar
I’m not a thief’

But you don’t give
a damn, don’t
wanna get close,
worried it might
rub off, typical
welfare come
social worker wanna
beeze’s

To whomever might
give me a passing
accidental glance,
to whomever might
have the guts to stop
and say hello

I didn’t mean to
kill my baby daught
I wasn’t right
I was sick

Dear anyone to anyone
who just might care
I didn’t know
I just didn’t know
I’m still not
sure

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Morning Song by Sylvia Plath

Love set you going like a fat gold watch.
The midwife slapped your footsoles, and your bald cry
Took its place among the elements.

Our voices echo, magnifying your arrival. New statue.
In a drafty museum, your nakedness
Shadows our safety. We stand round blankly as walls.

I'm no more your mother
Than the cloud that distils a mirror to reflect its own slow
Effacement at the wind's hand.

All night your moth-breath
Flickers among the flat pink roses. I wake to listen:
A far sea moves in my ear.

One cry, and I stumble from bed, cow-heavy and floral
In my Victorian nightgown.
Your mouth opens clean as a cat's. The window square

Whitens and swallows its dull stars. And now you try
Your handful of notes;
The clear vowels rise like balloons.

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soooo good
the rival by S.Plath [ again:)]

If the moon smiled, she would resemble you.
You leave the same impression
Of something beautiful, but annihilating.
Both of you are great light borrowers.
Her O-mouth grieves at the world; yours is unaffected,

And your first gift is making stone out of everything.
I wake to a mausoleum; you are here,
Ticking your fingers on the marble table, looking for cigarettes,
Spiteful as a woman, but not so nervous,
And dying to say something unanswerable.

The moon, too, abuses her subjects,
But in the daytime she is ridiculous.
Your dissatisfactions, on the other hand,
Arrive through the mailslot with loving regularity,
White and blank, expansive as carbon monoxide.

No day is safe from news of you,
Walking about in Africa maybe, but thinking of me.

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Cat in an empty apartment

Dying - you wouldn't do that to a cat.
For what is a cat to do
in an empty apartment?
Climb up the walls?
Brush up against the furniture?
Nothing here seems changed,
and yet something has changed.
Nothing has been moved,
and yet there's more room.
And in the evenings the lamp is not on.

One hears footsteps on the stairs,
but they're not the same.
Neither is the hand
that puts a fish on the plate.

Something here isn't starting
at its usual time.
Something here isn't happening
as it should.
Somebody has been here and has been,
and then has suddenly disappeared
and now is stubbornly absent.

All the closets have been scanned
and all the shelves run through.
Slipping under the carpet and checking came to nothing.
The rule has even been broken and all the papers scattered.
What else is there to do?
Sleep and wait.

Just let him come back,
let him show up.
Then he'll find out
that you don't do that to a cat.
Going toward him
faking reluctance,
slowly,
on very offended paws.
And no jumping, purring at first.

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